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Croabadrin

Big Beasties

Posted by Croabadrin Jul. 2, 2008 @ 9:27 PM EDT

Recently my mind has been brimming with many monsters of the nasty sort, and i'll even make a special one for anybody who asks! I have some premade monsters, but for those of whom request, I will make one that would probably symbolise the requestor!
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Creatures to make:

Warboy
EvilGrowlyWolf
Kyubbii
Smitty0123
skillz (done)
Jaz (working: Empress Aevis)
Lunar
General (done)
Kegamashi
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~Friends List~

Lunar: First Friend on NG. Writing another branch to the NG Chronicles.
Flipboi: Fighting for his computer.
General: Metallic General who led an army against the NG animations.
skillz: Back from Vacation!
Fire Fox: My current output for random facts.
Divine Dragon: A close friend met in real life.
Kegamashi: I have a Soul-Reaping ninja for a little brother... great.
EvilGrowlyWolf: Has a list of facts.
AmySaysRawr: The emo that says rawr.
Z-dad: My Older Brother, the King of Games!
JazLovesMusic: Has a ducky!
Kazic: Writing about Humanity's biggest mistake.
Kyubbii: Foremer enemy. Likes Runescape.
Ape: Pivot Guy.
Chuck Norris: there is nothing to fear but Chuck Himself.
Angroy *Pivot!*
Delek
Grice
Diablo *Pivot!*
Frear *Pivot!*
Kalet & Serene *Pivot!*
Sleytra *Pivot!*
Veylord
Meela

~Story Chapters~
Chapter 1: It All Starts Here
Chapter 2: A New Friend
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Okay, here's what's been happening. I haven't had much time to work on them, but I can still get them done. Secondly, I tried to do these on paper, and it didn't work. It will all be done on Paint Program. I will stick to the original design, though.
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Sorry, skillz. Forgot Shaden's description.

A being from a dimesion not known to man, Shaden is a strange creature. There have been no reports of harm done by Shaden, but anyone who sets eyes on it feels a sense of dread and despair. Little is known about it, but there have been reports all over the world.

The frequency of the sightings are increasing. Some people know Shaden's purpose here.
They will not speak of it.
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Well, General, your companion is finally built.
The Ultimech V2 is a nearly unstoppable force that doesn't look like it is. It can seem small or distorted at a distance due to light-bending waves that radiate from the chest area, and is frightfully fast. The chain gun on the right shoulder packs a punch with a fire rate beyond that of a normal chain gun, and the mini-rocket on the left has about the power of a tank shell. As I said, it's fast, and that makes the blade on the left arm something to worry about. Don't think you can outrun it. the arm on its right is mostly for practical needs, used as a hand and for investigation and such.

The Ultimech series of machines, like Shaden, came from a different dimension, and their technology is far beyond that of the human race, mainly seen in their intelligence and ammunition. Shaden sightings are often followed by wandering Ultimech sightings. While some are passive and non-agressive, several have been known to attack buildings and people. Few deaths have been recorded, but whenever they do attack, witnesses to the carnage report that they seem to be searching. Many people hypothesize that they were sent to destroy Shaden, but why?

"Friendly" Ultimechs have been known to help on occasion, but not always for the right cause. There was one occasion when an Ultimech literally destroyed the side of a fire hydrant to put out the starting flames on a nearby home, while another one helped an evil soul in an unknown land. Ultimechs are truly a perplexing set of beings.
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Ultimech types:

Ultimech V1: The first ever sighted. Also known as the "Doom Machine", it befriended an evil soul and allowed them to use it as a protective suit. This, however, weakened its power, and was presumably destroyed. It comprised of four blade legs on a small platform that supported a glass dome just big enough for the evil soul.

Ultimech V2: Shown below, this is known as the "Hero Mech". It has been known to have a generally good nature and helps those in dire need. It is also one of the most intelligent, being able to recognize potential threats before any human possibly could. This Ultimech once actually broke open the side of a Fire Hydrant to put out a fire just as it started in someone's home. The strem of water flew straight through a window and doused the flame before it even flared up. Like other Ultimechs, it does not speak.

Ultimech V3: This Ultimech is a rare sight. Resembling a human-sized metal version of the Ice Titan seen in the Disney movie Hercules... It tends to appear immediately after a Shaden sighting, before the others. Several of the few sightings of this Ultimech are fights with the Empress Aevis, the fights having been sparked by her getting in its way for an unknown reason.

Ultimech V4: Only one sighting exists of this Ultimech; at the same time as a Shaden sighting, in the same area. A spikey wheel with bulyky arms at the sides, it left a trail of deep gouges in the ground as it rolled through the city. Nobody knows this Ultimech's personality or full capabilities.

Ultimech_V2.JPG

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Jul. 2, 2008 | 9:28 PM smitty0123 says:

make a monster with lots of eyes

Jul. 2, 2008 | 9:38 PM Croabadrin responds:

Well, I have one with eight... it's aquatic. If i can find where it went to, i'll put that one up first.


Jul. 2, 2008 | 10:29 PM JazLovesMusic says:

Cool...

Jul. 3, 2008 | 8:36 PM Croabadrin responds:

I guess so.


Jul. 2, 2008 | 10:45 PM Kegamashi says:

Turd monkey!

that's for the spelling

Jul. 3, 2008 | 8:38 PM Croabadrin responds:

Yurble Stench!

That's for complaining.


Jul. 3, 2008 | 10:14 AM evilgrowlywolf says:

oh makes me one pl0x

<3 Growly

Jul. 3, 2008 | 8:39 PM Croabadrin responds:

Sure thing!

...hm... I'm thinking...
What color of fur would you like?


Jul. 3, 2008 | 10:45 AM kyubbii says:

in under a month i go from enemy #1 to KYUBBII THE OMNI ELEMENTAL FORCE FROM HELL to bored

Jul. 3, 2008 | 8:39 PM Croabadrin responds:

Yup. I guess that's how it goes.


Jul. 3, 2008 | 2:32 PM kyubbii says:

can you make a anthro fox demon

Jul. 3, 2008 | 8:40 PM Croabadrin responds:

Absolutely! Normal Orange or other choice colors?


Jul. 3, 2008 | 8:24 PM Kazic5000 says:

Lolol you mispelled my name xD

BY THE WAY! Ill post the new chapter when Flipboi sees it, later.

Jul. 3, 2008 | 8:38 PM Croabadrin responds:

A-heheh... i fixed that now...

Yay, new chapter soon! ...well, that depends if Flip can get on to see it...


Jul. 3, 2008 | 10:53 PM kyubbii says:

yea normal i want to see what u can do

Jul. 4, 2008 | 6:29 PM Croabadrin responds:

Don't espect too much... i'm not exactly the best artist. It may take awhile to make it look decent!


Jul. 4, 2008 | 7:40 PM dragonsangel says:

happy 4th of july

Jul. 4, 2008 | 8:20 PM Croabadrin responds:

same to you!


Jul. 4, 2008 | 7:45 PM kyubbii says:

also happy 4th

Jul. 4, 2008 | 8:20 PM Croabadrin responds:

and you!


Jul. 5, 2008 | 12:05 PM kyubbii says:

happy cleaning up day where you try to clean ur yard of bottle rocket stick and empty mortar charges wilst battleing a hangover

Jul. 5, 2008 | 4:15 PM Croabadrin responds:

I don't have to deal with the hangover... but the rocket part is true. Good luck to you!


Jul. 5, 2008 | 6:45 PM Kegamashi says:

Hey, what about me!?!

Jul. 5, 2008 | 8:40 PM Croabadrin responds:

What about you?

just kiddig. I already gave you one quite some time ago! Remember the Lizard Warrior?


Jul. 5, 2008 | 7:02 PM kyubbii says:

oh yea i forgot your only 15 meh im only 13

Jul. 5, 2008 | 8:40 PM Croabadrin responds:

Oh well.


Jul. 5, 2008 | 8:01 PM skillz14 says:

Can haz 1 pl0x?

Jul. 5, 2008 | 8:41 PM Croabadrin responds:

Naturally! It will be... Dark themed, right?


Jul. 5, 2008 | 9:23 PM JazLovesMusic says:

Can I have one?
(:3

Jul. 6, 2008 | 7:37 PM Croabadrin responds:

Sure! so... what do you think of a bird-type?


Jul. 6, 2008 | 8:59 PM JazLovesMusic says:

Cool...
Black plz?

Jul. 6, 2008 | 10:58 PM Croabadrin responds:

Ah, so a black bird? maybe a little tough... it would be easier if it weren't humanoid. Would that be okay?


Jul. 7, 2008 | 12:01 AM JazLovesMusic says:

Wha? Oh...whoops...sorry XP
Nah, make it any color ya want...
What color were you thinking?

Jul. 10, 2008 | 4:05 PM Croabadrin responds:

Um... the color stated above.


Jul. 7, 2008 | 6:13 PM kyubbii says:

rough guess how long will these pics take

Jul. 10, 2008 | 4:08 PM Croabadrin responds:

Well, I suppose that would depend on several factors:

A) What the creature is. I tend to do non-humanoids faster, but...
B) How well I think I can get the pictures to look. If i'm not happy, I redo.
C) When I will get off my lazy butt to do it. I have one started...


Jul. 7, 2008 | 9:54 PM ape4 says:

I am shocked to see that you do not regard me as a friend.

Jul. 10, 2008 | 4:12 PM Croabadrin responds:

Oh, sorry!
...is it just me, or do i do that alot?


Jul. 9, 2008 | 8:08 PM Kegamashi says:

oh, I don't remember.

Jul. 10, 2008 | 4:08 PM Croabadrin responds:

Oh come on... Humanoid Lizard... Giant... Wings... Big Fangs?


Jul. 10, 2008 | 3:56 PM generalchampion says:

make 1 of me

Jul. 10, 2008 | 4:09 PM Croabadrin responds:

Sure!


Jul. 10, 2008 | 5:02 PM generalchampion says:

WHAT AM I GONNA B

Jul. 12, 2008 | 4:48 PM Croabadrin responds:

Well, I figured you'd be a machine... that's sort of a given.


Jul. 10, 2008 | 8:18 PM Kegamashi says:

oooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...

Jul. 12, 2008 | 4:48 PM Croabadrin responds:

wwwwwhhhhhhaaaaaaaatttttttt...?


Jul. 10, 2008 | 8:37 PM skillz14 says:

done yet? :3

Jul. 12, 2008 | 4:49 PM Croabadrin responds:

No... not just yet...


Jul. 12, 2008 | 11:10 PM generalchampion says:

whos next

Jul. 13, 2008 | 3:49 PM Croabadrin responds:

Yours. It's the next easiest.


Jul. 13, 2008 | 4:04 PM JazLovesMusic says:

It does not 'stink'...I think it's actually pretty good.

Jul. 13, 2008 | 4:15 PM Croabadrin responds:

thanks... although I messed that wing up pretty badly.


Jul. 13, 2008 | 9:22 PM kyubbii says:

whos is the hardest to draw

Jul. 14, 2008 | 7:19 PM Croabadrin responds:

well... yours or Jazs.


Jul. 14, 2008 | 11:06 AM kyubbii says:

cant you just take this pic and slap ur name on it http://arania.kamiki.net/Furry%20Art/
Anthro%20Kyuubi%20Naruto%20watermarke d.jpg
(dont do that i didnt make it)

Jul. 14, 2008 | 7:20 PM Croabadrin responds:

You made that?


Jul. 14, 2008 | 8:54 PM kyubbii says:

no i didnt arania did

Jul. 14, 2008 | 9:08 PM Croabadrin responds:

...Yeah, I suppose I should have seen that... well, I'm not one for plageurism... however you spell it.


Jul. 15, 2008 | 2:19 PM kyubbii says:

plagiarism

Jul. 15, 2008 | 5:31 PM Croabadrin responds:

Yeah, that.


Jul. 15, 2008 | 6:48 PM kyubbii says:

hahahaha i beat your challenge

Jul. 15, 2008 | 9:20 PM Croabadrin responds:

...challenge?


Jul. 16, 2008 | 1:05 AM dragonsangel says:

i think it is pretty cool

Jul. 17, 2008 | 12:06 AM Croabadrin responds:

Thanks! As I keep saying... the wings could definately be better.


Jul. 16, 2008 | 12:13 PM kyubbii says:

look 3 posts up

Jul. 17, 2008 | 12:07 AM Croabadrin responds:

...Oh.


Jul. 16, 2008 | 3:36 PM Warboy1945 says:

Wow, you are very creative

Jul. 17, 2008 | 12:09 AM Croabadrin responds:

Uh... thanks, but that's not my most creative one. You really should see some of my more... mystic types.


Jul. 16, 2008 | 11:18 PM skillz14 says:

Purrdy

Jul. 17, 2008 | 12:10 AM Croabadrin responds:

If you say so.


Jul. 17, 2008 | 12:11 AM Warboy1945 says:

Oh really? Well I would love to see more of these then

Jul. 17, 2008 | 12:13 AM Croabadrin responds:

woah... that was fast. Well, I suppose I could make you one. What do you say?


Jul. 18, 2008 | 1:42 AM flipboi117 says:

"~Friends List~
Flipboi: Is he...?"

You gotta be kidding right? Of course I am. I'm just not on as much anymore.

Jul. 19, 2008 | 11:46 PM Croabadrin responds:

Sorry, It's just that I had left several comments on your page and they were never put up there... I didn't know if you had gotten caught or something.


Jul. 18, 2008 | 11:24 PM Warboy1945 says:

That'd be great, except I don't have any ideas. so think you can think of one?

Jul. 19, 2008 | 11:48 PM Croabadrin responds:

Well... I was thinking a medeival type thing...


Jul. 19, 2008 | 10:57 PM Kegamashi says:

Croab... your crazy.

Jul. 19, 2008 | 11:49 PM Croabadrin responds:

You mean "you're".


Jul. 20, 2008 | 1:55 AM burrito15 says:

Its pretty shitty, but it looks like you did this in Paint, so I'll let it slide! ^_^

Jul. 20, 2008 | 7:02 PM Croabadrin responds:

I did.


Jul. 20, 2008 | 9:21 AM kyubbii says:

you just love to piss him off dont ya

Jul. 20, 2008 | 7:03 PM Croabadrin responds:

He doesn't bother me.


Jul. 20, 2008 | 2:31 PM lalagirl24354 says:

haha yup u member me from click upon dots ^^

Jul. 20, 2008 | 7:03 PM Croabadrin responds:

Yay, you remember me, too!


Jul. 21, 2008 | 12:19 AM Kegamashi says:

STOP CORRECTING MY SPELLING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jul. 22, 2008 | 8:59 PM Croabadrin responds:

Why?


Jul. 21, 2008 | 11:32 AM kyubbii says:

keep correcting his spelling its funny as hell

Jul. 22, 2008 | 8:59 PM Croabadrin responds:

Don't worry, I will.


Jul. 22, 2008 | 4:16 PM kyubbii says:

so how are the monsters coming

Jul. 22, 2008 | 8:59 PM Croabadrin responds:

Sorry, I haven't had much time to work on them. General's is almost complete now, though!


Jul. 25, 2008 | 9:27 PM Kegamashi says:

I hate you.

Jul. 25, 2008 | 10:19 PM Croabadrin responds:

If you say so.


Jul. 25, 2008 | 9:29 PM Kegamashi says:

and I mean I really hate you. T_T

Jul. 25, 2008 | 10:20 PM Croabadrin responds:

Yeah, you told me that.


Jul. 25, 2008 | 10:32 PM kyubbii says:

*slurps soda* YES FIGHT TO THE DEATH it wil amuse me

Jul. 25, 2008 | 11:08 PM Croabadrin responds:

Heheh... we've done that on more than one occasion.


Jul. 26, 2008 | 10:16 AM kyubbii says:

then how are you still here if it was too the deth

Jul. 26, 2008 | 5:53 PM Croabadrin responds:

Well... not really to death, but we were within an inch there!


Jul. 27, 2008 | 12:43 PM kyubbii says:

nice mech keep the legs and put some parts on armored core on it and it would look like the mech i built

Jul. 27, 2008 | 6:58 PM Croabadrin responds:

Heheh... that's weird.


Jul. 27, 2008 | 5:21 PM generalchampion says:

so im an assassin robot. coo

Jul. 27, 2008 | 6:58 PM Croabadrin responds:

Yup.


Jul. 27, 2008 | 5:24 PM generalchampion says:

wait am i ultimech V1

Jul. 27, 2008 | 6:58 PM Croabadrin responds:

no, V2. the hero one.


Jul. 29, 2008 | 1:50 PM kyubbii says:

a picture and story so who is next

Jul. 29, 2008 | 3:41 PM Croabadrin responds:

You can see the next person to have their creature in my "Orders to fill" list.


Jul. 29, 2008 | 9:13 PM kyubbii says:

oh ok

Jul. 31, 2008 | 12:16 AM Croabadrin responds:

ok.


Jul. 30, 2008 | 11:19 PM Kegamashi says:

Interesting. Not the best you've done in recent times but still rather creative. I like it.

Jul. 31, 2008 | 12:16 AM Croabadrin responds:

Thanks!

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