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Age/Gender: 16, Male
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Talking to oneself just took on a whole new meaning...

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Croabadrin

Here's how it goes...

Posted by Croabadrin Aug. 4, 2008 @ 11:15 PM EDT

Well... that last NG Tournament Chronicles chapter didn't turn out so well... so i'm going to go ahead and write on the other story I was planning on! It goes in several sections per chapter: one section per point of view. The sections are one or more Ultimech Hunt Logs, Dark Promise (Shaden), and Ethreal Mystery (Empress Aevis). Tell me what you think! but first... Empress Aevis' introduction!

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A gigantic bird of bright colors, the Empress Aevis can show up anywhere at any time. Some say her plumage is blinding; others say it is beautiful. The Empress Aevis is known to be Female, for the voice that resonates from her is female, though no mouth movement is seen. It is suspected that powerful telepathy is used to do this. She is usually quiet, though sometimes she will converse with humans. Like Ultimech V2, she appears Ethreal at a distance, shape wavering. She seems to be searching for something, and is sometimes seen fighting the Ultimech V3. Humans who are in her presence get a feeling of calm. Some say she is the exact opposite of Shaden; others know different.

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Hunt Log: V1 Reporting.

Objective failed. Power Source subject destroyed by bioforms "Jack" and "Carey", moderate damage sustained from Plasma Stream generated by the combination of efforts between bioforms "Jack", "Jenny", "James". Escape from compound successful without further damage. Continuing hunt for Dark-Matter lifeform "Shaden".

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Hunt Log: V2 Reporting.

Every day I continue to wonder. My brothers take action without mercy, destroying anything in their way with mindless determination. I have no such desire, nor intent to do this. I... do not know what is wrong with me. I have observed the Hunt Logs of my brothers, yet mine are the only ones that stray from the subject. Is it possible that I am malfunctioning? On another note, I recently discovered that there are some extra files in my memory banks. The files are locked, and I have no access to them. What are they?

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*Dark Promise*

To wander... to find... to rest...

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*Ethreal Mystery*

I cannot believe it! I saw... I truly saw...

...I was so close.

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Okay, I don't think this will work... maybe a few reports with an actual chapter of a story...
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Creatures to make:

Warboy
EvilGrowlyWolf
Kyubbii (working)
Smitty0123
skillz (done: Shaden)
Jaz (done: Empress Aevis)
Lunar
General (done: Ultimech V2)
Kegamashi
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~Friends List~

Lunar: First Friend on NG. Writing another branch to the NG Chronicles.
Flipboi: Original writer of the NG Tournament Chronicles.
General: Metallic General who led an army against the NG animations.
skillz: Back from Vacation!
Fire Fox: My current output for random facts.
Divine Dragon: A close friend met in real life.
Kegamashi: I have a Soul-Reaping ninja for a little brother... great.
EvilGrowlyWolf: Has a list of facts.
AmySaysRawr: The emo that says rawr.
Z-dad: My Older Brother, the King of Games!
JazLovesMusic: Has a ducky!
Kazic: Writing about Humanity's biggest mistake.
Kyubbii: Foremer enemy. Likes Runescape.
Ape: Pivot Guy.
Chuck Norris: there is nothing to fear but Chuck Himself.
Angroy *Pivot!*
Delek
Grice
Diablo *Pivot!*
Frear *Pivot!*
Kalet & Serene *Pivot!*
Sleytra *Pivot!*
Veylord
Meela

Kyubbii.JPG

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22 Comments

Aug. 4, 2008 | 11:36 PM ngfan14 says:

I'm sorry but I didn't read the post. I was too busy staring at the banner. Did you actually try when you made it?

Aug. 5, 2008 | 4:55 PM Croabadrin responds:

Uh... I did, but my mouse was a little messed up at the time... I should probably fix it.


Aug. 5, 2008 | 12:31 AM skillz14 says:

that bird is eye bleedingily cool

Aug. 5, 2008 | 4:56 PM Croabadrin responds:

Yeah... I meant to make it really bright.


Aug. 5, 2008 | 10:17 AM kyubbii says:

hehehe eyebleedingly its like a parrot/swan combo

Aug. 5, 2008 | 4:56 PM Croabadrin responds:

Yup... except it's the size of a large truck.


Aug. 5, 2008 | 1:09 PM rex243 says:

I just want to make love to that bird. :3

Aug. 5, 2008 | 4:56 PM Croabadrin responds:

0_0...

uh...


Aug. 5, 2008 | 2:02 PM JazLovesMusic says:

Aw, cool...
Pretty...and...bright colors!

Aug. 5, 2008 | 4:58 PM Croabadrin responds:

Thanks!


Aug. 5, 2008 | 11:53 PM Kegamashi says:

I'm going to fart on you.

And just to let you know, I did it just before I typed this. heheheh...

Aug. 6, 2008 | 12:01 AM Croabadrin responds:

That's good... because I was nowhere near you at the time.


Aug. 6, 2008 | 3:23 PM kyubbii says:

so whos creature is next

Aug. 6, 2008 | 6:10 PM Croabadrin responds:

Uh... I guess I'll go ahead and get yours done.


Aug. 6, 2008 | 6:13 PM kyubbii says:

cool

Aug. 6, 2008 | 6:26 PM Croabadrin responds:

...WHAT THE HECK!!!??

ARE YOU ON CONSTANTLY, EVERY DAY, EVEY NIGHT, WITHOUT PAUSE??!?!?!

I JUST NOW replied to your comment above!


Aug. 6, 2008 | 9:55 PM kyubbii says:

not all night but mostly all day i get off at 9 when my mom is home and 10:30 when she is working so im about to get off in 5 minutes

Aug. 6, 2008 | 10:24 PM Croabadrin responds:

Oh.


Aug. 6, 2008 | 10:52 PM Kegamashi says:

I farted on my cat and he got up and walked away.

Aug. 7, 2008 | 12:06 AM Croabadrin responds:

Yeah... but then again, when the cat himself farts, he walks away!


Aug. 7, 2008 | 12:32 PM kyubbii says:

ew thats nasty

Aug. 7, 2008 | 10:29 PM Croabadrin responds:

Well, gas is a natural part of life at our house.


Aug. 7, 2008 | 8:13 PM Kegamashi says:

Yes it is but you don't see me complaning.

Aug. 7, 2008 | 10:29 PM Croabadrin responds:

"don't see you complaining"? That's not what it looks like when I have gas...


Aug. 8, 2008 | 12:02 AM kyubbii says:

ahahahahaha

Aug. 8, 2008 | 4:49 PM Croabadrin responds:

You do NOT want to see me on days where I've eaten beans...


Aug. 8, 2008 | 10:03 PM kyubbii says:

your lucky my brother will clear an entire house

Aug. 9, 2008 | 4:48 PM Croabadrin responds:

Yeah... so can mine.


Aug. 10, 2008 | 12:29 PM kyubbii says:

wich 1

Aug. 12, 2008 | 7:33 PM Croabadrin responds:

older.


Aug. 11, 2008 | 12:47 AM Kegamashi says:

The ultimate recipe for a really BAD fart is... 1 beer and 2 scrambled eggs. If you really want to find out how bad it is, ask Croab.

Aug. 12, 2008 | 7:33 PM Croabadrin responds:

Yup.


Aug. 12, 2008 | 10:11 PM kyubbii says:

ok how did u get a beer

Aug. 21, 2008 | 6:26 PM Croabadrin responds:

We didn't... our older brother did.


Aug. 14, 2008 | 9:07 PM darknessdweller says:

darknessdweller wuz here.

Aug. 21, 2008 | 6:26 PM Croabadrin responds:

So i see.


Aug. 15, 2008 | 5:14 PM kyubbii says:

why are you everywhere

Aug. 21, 2008 | 6:27 PM Croabadrin responds:

I don't know how he gets around so much.


Aug. 19, 2008 | 6:42 PM generalchampion says:

hmm. yes indeed

Aug. 21, 2008 | 6:27 PM Croabadrin responds:

I agree!

...now what did I just agree to?


Aug. 21, 2008 | 6:55 PM kyubbii says:

sooo hows the picture coming

Aug. 23, 2008 | 6:25 PM Croabadrin responds:

I have been really busy lately, and it hasn't been coming well... I keep trying to make it look better, but only makes it seem worse! I'm starting to wonder if I should change your creature... I know yours was requested, but...


Aug. 23, 2008 | 9:34 PM kyubbii says:

i dont care about the quality if u tryed ur best post it

Aug. 24, 2008 | 6:03 PM Croabadrin responds:

Alright, then. Thanks for the encouragement!

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